we’re back to writing essays now I took a survey last week and you guys voted for problem-solution essays then let’s make it happen now we’ve already covered the agree/disagree essays we’ve already covered the two views essays and if you’ve missed that I’ll link it below now you might actually feel a little lost following along with my essay template videos because you might not have seen the outline video or the brainstorming video so I’m just gonna link all of the essay related videos below so you check that out and if you feel a little bit lost that’s gonna help you understand what I’m talking about now I’m also gonna link the document that we’re going to be using in this video so if you want to print that out and follow along feel free to do so now if you want a copy of the actual templates hit me up on my Instagram I’m gonna link my Instagram right here just hit me up send me a message and I will send you all of my Pte structure essay templates free of charge now the structured templates they’re suitable for those people who are comfortable with writing sentences or they don’t feel like memorizing a whole lot of things right and that’s perfectly suitable for that but if you are more comfortable with memorizing everything and having the entire essay pretty much already written out and you just got to memorize it well I got a solution for that as well that is called my for essay template now that is actually only available in my courses so if you’re interested in that you gotta check out my website now with that said y’all ready for this let’s get into it [Music] all right so let’s jump right into the essay template because you already know how to get a copy of these templates you have seen these before I’ve done the structure and then the brainstorming so let’s jump straight into it this is what the template looks like we will structure it in a very similar way as the previous essays and again this is more suitable for people that don’t like to memorize too much and they want to write by themselves so as you can see here you will write your own simple sentences I won’t be asking you to write anything that’s out of your comfort zone and once you are done with that again you just insert it into the template the template is not something you complete not something you read and complete the rest of the sentence it’s not that kind of template so before we even go to the first step what do we do first before we even think about the essay itself what I want you to do first is type the template out first so let me show you what that looks like and here it is as you can see the essay template has already been typed out now this is what you want to do on the actual exam before you start even writing the essay you type the template out first and you just start filling in the information afterwards you should spend about five minutes typing out the template now some of you might be thinking well how do you even know what kind of essay you’re going to be getting well that’s the reason why if you compare all of the essay templates that I created depending on the topic because you see I have already talked about agree or disagree two views and this one is the problem solution how do you know which one you’re gonna get well first of all most of the essays will be agree or disagree sometimes you’ll get something different like this one is problem solution so what if you get that well the only thing that ever changes is probably three sentences at the most so if that’s not the essay you get you can just change three of those sentences now I ask for myself every time I take the exam I don’t rely on the essay to help me get to 79 so I don’t really care about the essay score because I can get my writing points from the listening and the reading I always write agree or disagree I don’t actually care if they ask me agree or disagree I will always write agree or disagree and sometimes I get a really bad essay score but I don’t get under 79 I will Oh get over 79 because of my listening and reading and that’s why I say I don’t really rely on the essay to get my points but if you need the essay to get your points then you want to try and answer the question a little bit on topic cuz usually I am completely off topic now what that’s it you have the essay template typed out and now we will go to step 1 and what is step on we want to identify the essay topic in order to identify the body topic because this is the brainstorm so let’s read the essay topic and it is what problems can be created when people spend too much time on work than their personal life and that is the question they’re asking us now down here they’re asking us to solve that so again this is a problem-solution essay but we do need to create the noun the essay topic and by reading this what is that noun normally I would just take one word like time or even work but that really doesn’t tell you much about the essay topic so this one right here I might have to take the phrase because the verb is also part of that topic so I will go all the way up from work to spend and I’ll use this I’ll highlight this for you I’ll use this as the essay topic now spend is a verb so we can’t use that as a noun so hopefully you know how to change a verb into a noun this will require you to know a little bit about parts of speech but I’m talking about right now if you ever have a verb and you need it to be a noun because now we’re gonna create a phrase a noun phrase what do we do we would change this to ing spending too much time on work now that becomes a noun phrase so we can use this later on once we have the essay topic established it is time to create the body topics body one body to body one is the problem body two is the solution that is the topic that they want us to talk about as you can see here for the topic I don’t need you to write sentences we just need to create a noun a noun will be enough to create that topic for the body so we need to create a problem that comes from spending too much time on work I just think of a word like I’ll say exhaustion just type it right done exhaustion is the problem that comes from spending too much time on work all right and then now let’s just finish off the topics let’s create a solution for exhaustion what is something we can do to solve the problem of exhaustion let’s think of another noun let’s say I’ll take this we’re taking breaks all right now I’m not trying to write anything compelling I’m not trying to be printed in a newspaper we’re not going to impress anybody with our writing we just want to fill up the word count with good grammar right and as you can see here that is the topic sentence or the topic of the body and every time we write you can see by now every time we write we will have four sentences in the body all right we will be writing four sentences but the first one is already written for you you will see so now we go to the supporting reasons inside the body the supporting reasons right now I’m still just going to write down some words to give me ideas right it’s the structure of it right now you want to be familiar with the structure so when you get to the real exam you don’t need to think about boxes and stuff like that so right now we’re just practicing step by step you will not do this on the actual exam you will just start writing the sentences but by then you will already know what the sequence is so now I always ask you the same questions if you compare the past essays you’ll see it’s always the same questions so here how or why does it happen what is that referring to exhaustion so why or how why I was thinking why so I said that first I’ll give you the why let me think I’ll say a lack of sleep right why are they exhausted well they have a lack of sleep I will create a sentence later for now that’s my idea and then next what is the result you can either say a result of exhaustion all right you can say for this or you can say as a result of a lack of sleep it doesn’t really matter what you write so for me I’ll just say poor performance done do you agree I’m not using anything compelling right no difficult vocabulary words think you know all of these words if you have a lack of sleep you have poor performance at work right we’re talking about work so that’s the first thing that I thought of and then now here example I always tell people to write a specific example it doesn’t have to be true just name something you can name a country if you don’t know anything else but since they’re talking about work talking about businesses well I always use these big names or I’ll say something about Apple and then now let’s talk about solution taking breaks well then ask the question how do we how do we take breaks or why do we take breaks oh how do you take breaks is that something somebody has to teach you I hope that so let’s just say what we can do how we can do it let’s say we set a break let’s set a break when every hour I think that’s something that we should do right I’m not sure next we after we set break what is the result what is the result either of taking breaks or setting a break what do you think what can be a result of that I would say we take break we can rest reset reset I’ll say reset I said type reset and I was thinking rest I don’t know what the hell I was thinking but reset is good reset the mind I was gonna say rest of mine but hey either way I don’t care and then the next one example again we still talking about work companies so let’s talk about the end of me let’s talk about Google whatever you say whatever you make up doesn’t matter again who’s gonna read this nobody and that is our brainstorm we have created the ideas that we want to talk about and the next thing we want to do would be step two what do we do create sentences with these ideas and that’s what I want to do now but because I’m just gonna be typing out sentences this is where I’ll fast forward it alright you don’t need to hear me 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bit all right and lastly I’ll talk about Apple and I made up something about Apple does this have to be true hey you’ll know and then we move into the second body the second body here taking breaks same thing and then set a break every hour and I established that right here and remember a verb becoming a noun at this setting and then here says reset the mind and I wrote the breaks will reset the mind and then I made up something about Google and that is it that is the second step where we created the sentences now we can go into the third step and the third step is to take each sentence I’m gonna scroll down I’m gonna take the sentence and the words that we have created and we’re gonna put them into the template that we have already typed out and as you can see here just that noun right so we know what we’re gonna put here now and now from the topic we already know that as well the noun from the topic is spending too much time on work and then we’re gonna put the noun from the body topic and you’ll see I’ll put it in step by step so what I’ll do first is I’m gonna insert the sentences that I created along with the noun for the body so what I’m gonna do is basically finish off the body while I’m doing that I’m gonna speed up the video again as well basically I’m gonna be copy and pasting and formatting you don’t need to hear me talk to myself again for that and then when I’m finished I will slow back down and we’re gonna talk about the intro in the conclusion y’all ready let’s do this and we are done hopefully you notice that what I did was basically take all the sentences that we wrote as part of the brainstorm and the sentence creation and then I took it and copy and paste it in the bodies there’s gonna be four sentences each sentence is already spoken for and as you can see I didn’t really care whether or not the sentences worked grammatically when I put these sentence in here because it’s supposed to work if you write your own sentence a complete sentence and you put it in here that’s gonna be enough I didn’t make up a sentence in race half of it and ask you to complete it that’s the other templates that you find on on the Internet we’re not required to do that here and once you have that body remember I separated the sentences so it’s easier for you to read but we should put this into paragraph form so I’ll do that for you right now and you can see that this is going to be our body 1 and body 2 and once I finish with this I will show you how to do the introduction and the conclusion and there it is so even though the introduction is first I’m gonna do the conclusion first all right and the reason is because most of the information is already there so for example right here I ended in the previous tutorial about the two views essay I always write the same thing here it is expected that this trend we’ll continue to increase in future doesn’t matter if it makes sense or not that’s what I always write so you don’t actually need to create your own sentence there at all and then here do you see paraphrase body one body two well we already have those sentences created so let’s just copy and paste that now here I need a pic is it a cause or problem we’re writing about problems so let’s copy this sentence right here right because we need this sentence and then we need to put it here now I’m not gonna use the whole thing though I’m not gonna use the whole sentence I am gonna shorten it as we look at it but right now it’s a complete sentence and then you see here are we writing something that’s similar or opposite or it’s a solution so it should be opposite so I’m gonna take I don’t need your opinion here just take this this is the complete sentence itself we’re gonna copy it and we’re gonna paste it here but remember we’re not gonna keep the whole thing it’s just for the time being I’ll put it up here and then now let’s start cutting it down so the main problem related to spending too much time on work is exhaustion let’s change this let’s say the set of problem let’s just say the main issue okay the main issue related to spending too much time on work is exhaustion let’s just leave that well we don’t need a paraphrase it too much just change words around if possible now here we have but the best is the best approach to overcome spending too much so this whole thing this whole thing is connected to this right here right it’s the same noun if we have the same noun we don’t have to write it twice what can we do pronoun just put that and now extraordinaire that arm completely we’re not trying to overwrite this we don’t need to write 299 words or anything like that so there you go so the best approach to overcome that which is this spending too much time I work is and I’m just gonna cut that out as well and just say breaks and now we have these two sentences created and the last one we need is right here okay and it’s the same up here so first of all there are three words that you want to choose from and which one is that I usually just pick the first one who cares whatever you want alright so we need to pair phrase the topic sentence and we’re gonna grab that real quick but first let’s just finish this off which one is it a problem world cause it’s a problem so let’s just get rid of that and then this right here we need nouns from the topic we already know that it’s this right it’s this I’m just gonna copy it every time you see the yellow you see that with writing the the noun from the essay topic so in the following essay I will discuss right here I’ll read it for you in the following essay I will discuss some of the biggest problems associated with spending too much time on work before suggesting possible solutions complete sentence no grammar mistakes all we did was just put it nouns I don’t want you to think too much all right so now the last part let me just make the paragraph smaller the last part it’s this right here we need to create our own sentence and what is that sentence it is this okay but if you don’t like to paraphrase most people don’t okay they don’t like to think of their own sentences basically so now we can basically copy their sentence right but right here it’s a question no doubt about it it’s a question so how do we change a question to a sentence okay it sounds like a difficult question right how do we change this to a sentence well first of all what makes this a question this word right here the what the what makes it a question so what if we just removed the what what if we just said problems can be created when people spend too much time on work than their personal life damn that’s a sentence that you know is that easy just by removing the who what where when that creates your sentence so let’s move that down we’re gonna copy that and paste it right here alright there’s the sentence I’ll put everything together afterwards so here we have a complete sentence I am NOT asking you to complete the template once again don’t look at the template like you need to complete something you don’t just put a complete sentence afterwards and you are good to go now this is quite long so let’s see if we can shorten it so problems maybe we can say once again Isis for issues just a paraphrase issues can be created let’s say issues occur okay when people when workers they say workers right um spend too much time on work let’s just leave that let’s just get rid of this done let’s just say that okay one of the most controversial issues today relates to how issues occur when workers spend too much time on work there you go no grammar mistakes right so now let’s move this up and make it a paragraph and same thing here let’s move this up and we have a paragraph right and then the last thing is here we need to paraphrase another sentence the thesis where is it it’s right here it’s the same one all right so let’s take this down here and see if we can change some words around so I’ll paste it right here issues occur let’s say arise issues arise when let’s say staff I just changed some words around no we use staff earlier let’s just change it around use it here since spend too much time spent too much time instead of saying I work I’ll say at the office how about that something related to work right and there is your paraphrase I basically copied their sentence and try to change a couple words around or deleted some words that is okay now let’s put this into a paragraph and what do we have here what do we have that is your si orale si how many words do we need to write in the PT academic essay do you remember we need to write between 200 to 300 and I try to keep it as low as possible and as you can see here we have 220 220 I wasn’t worried about the word count I just tried to write single simple sentences and then I input it into the template one by one I didn’t even read this I’m not even sure if this makes sense but I know I’m on topic I’m talking about the things that they asked me to talk about am i making a compelling argument I have no idea am I gonna try to write 290 words to try to prove a point hell no and that’s how I write the problem/solution essay all right ladies and gentlemen and that was the problem-solution essay and I used my structure template to write that essay once again if you want all of my structure essay templates just go to my Instagram send me a message and I’ll send you all of the templates free of charge if you thought this video was helpful please check out my other tutorials remember to drop a like subscribe comment I’ll see you on the next one peace